IELTS Writing practices (#2)

Adi Slamet Kusuma
1 min readFeb 24, 2021

The line graph above illustrates the percentages of Australian comodities sent to 4 nations between 1990 and 2012.

Overall, as can be seen that comodity to China has increased sharply through times and comodity for Japan has decreased steadily whilst both comodities for US and India are fluctuate during the period.

The percentages of comodities to 4 nations has 2 comodities that changed significantly and that is for China and for India. Comodites for China has rose steadily from 1990 to 2000 and increased more than 10 per cent after that period especially from 2005 to 2010. However, comodities for Japan saw decreased sharply from 1990 to 1995 and slowly decreased after that.

Meanwhile, the comodities for India and US has almost similar pattern because it fluctuate during that period. Comodities for US reached the lowest point at 2010 with only 5 per cent whilst comodities for India reached a peak at the same year with around 7 per cent.