IELTS writing practices (#16)

The diagram shows the procedure’s figure of making olive oil.

in general, the process begin with picking raw material from trees and processed several times and the results were divided into 2 new material, which was olive paste and olive stones. Moreover, the procedure lasts until it products sent into storage and sale.

The steps of making olive oil began with picking the material then rinsed it with cold water. after that, it smashing and the end product were 2 stuff, olive paste and olive stones. Moreover, those process need to use olive paste and put it into bag with holes. That bag put into pressing machine afterwards and then separated at different machine that aimed to gain oil and water. The final process was packed the oil into specific packaging and then sent into storage. Not only to store the product, but also bring them into marketplace and sale.

Posted in Malang, 19 May 2021, 23.30–23.50

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The diagram illustrates the process by which olive oil is produced

Overall, this is a step by step process that is comprised of seven stages, from the harvesting of the mature fruit from olive trees, to the packaging and sale of the finished product.

Initially, ripe olives are harvested from trees by farmers and then taken to rinsing machine where they are washed in cold water. After being rinsed, the olives are transferred via conveyor belt to another machine which grinds the olives to separate the fruit from the seeds. During this stage, the olives are ground into paste, and the olive stones are removed.

The olive paste is then placed in a type of perforated bag before being put through a pressing machine, followed by another process where any excess water is separated from the oil. And finally, the olive oil is packaged and delivered to shops where it can be sold.